Okay, the following are direct quotes from a REAL fic I had the (mis)fortune to beta for someone. It's hard to top these examples:
Example 1) With that said, Brad reached for robs underware, only to discover that there is nothing down there, and all he gets is a hand full of Robs warm fuzzy balls.
Example 2) The two sit there, waiting for Brads ass to loosen up, finally it does.
Example 3) Brad lets out a little whimper, sending a flood of milky white man juice streaming up to Robs chin. No sooner then Brad is done shoving down, he feels a miniature earthquake coming from inside his colon. Rob lets out a loud grunt and shakes as Brad feels Rob hot man load dump all over the insides of his colon.
Example 4, and my personal favorite) Rob and Brad disconnect from each other and look at one another. Rob bends over, taking Brads still hard cock into his mouth, sucking the last bits of Brads salty man load from the tip. Brad launches another load of milky man juice into Robs ass, and pulls out. Rob looks at Brad and grabs his camera phone. Brad grabs the phone and snaps a picture of Robs expanded asshole, dripping with white juices. Rob grabs the phone and takes a picture of Brads still expanded asshole, which is also dripping man juices even though it has been almost a half hour since Rob got through with him.
Emphasis added for my own amusement. I only wish that I could be so creative. Imagine if gay men really did walk around with expanded ass holes after having sex…there’d be shit falling out everywhere. I think my little friend needs an anatomy lesson.
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Example 1) With that said, Brad reached for robs underware, only to discover that there is nothing down there, and all he gets is a hand full of Robs warm fuzzy balls.
Example 2) The two sit there, waiting for Brads ass to loosen up, finally it does.
Example 3) Brad lets out a little whimper, sending a flood of milky white man juice streaming up to Robs chin. No sooner then Brad is done shoving down, he feels a miniature earthquake coming from inside his colon. Rob lets out a loud grunt and shakes as Brad feels Rob hot man load dump all over the insides of his colon.
Example 4, and my personal favorite) Rob and Brad disconnect from each other and look at one another. Rob bends over, taking Brads still hard cock into his mouth, sucking the last bits of Brads salty man load from the tip. Brad launches another load of milky man juice into Robs ass, and pulls out. Rob looks at Brad and grabs his camera phone. Brad grabs the phone and snaps a picture of Robs expanded asshole, dripping with white juices. Rob grabs the phone and takes a picture of Brads still expanded asshole, which is also dripping man juices even though it has been almost a half hour since Rob got through with him.
Emphasis added for my own amusement. I only wish that I could be so creative. Imagine if gay men really did walk around with expanded ass holes after having sex…there’d be shit falling out everywhere. I think my little friend needs an anatomy lesson.