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unamaga ([personal profile] unamaga) wrote2006-12-17 03:58 am
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Fic: Living It Right (PG)

ERICA IS BACK, OMG. I'm posting fic for her, because (1) I missed her like crazy and (2) she kicked winemaking's ass. I hope you like wee!chesters, baby!

Living It Right
1,012 words | PG | Gen


June, 1989 - Connecticut


“C’mon, Sammy,” Dean says, tugging at his little brother’s arm. Sam looks up at him, wide-eyed and frightened, and his tiny fingers dig into the back of Dean’s hand, clenching tight until Dean can feel his bones shifting. He leans forward, palm flat against Sam’s collarbone. “It’s okay, alright? No one’s going to bother you, I promise.”

Sam looks dubious, but he finally allows Dean to pull him out of the small changing room stall he’s been hiding in for over an hour. John is waiting for them outside when they emerge, leaning against the white shingled siding. He looks up when Dean kicks him in the foot.

“Hey, guys,” he says, smiling warmly. “You ready for some fun in the sun?”

Sam’s face pinches around the corners, mouth flattening into a thin, white line. If John notices, he doesn’t say anything, just sweeps Sam up onto his shoulders, pretending to adjust him around so he can tickle Sam under the arms. Dean squints up at the two of them, grinning, and then they set off. John keeps swerving around making ‘whoa’ noises until Sam shrieks and tugs on his hair.

They settle in just past the high tide line on the beach, spreading out a few towels and tucking the corners into the sand so nothing blows away. John is immediately shirtless, lying down on his stomach and falling asleep in short order. Dean kind of wants to bury him in sand, but he thinks it might not be appreciated.

Instead, he and Sam go down to the water with the bucket and little shovel they’d stolen from the gardening supplies earlier. Whatever self-consciousness Sam had dealt with earlier is completely gone by the time they get the first pail filled with wet sand.

Sam builds a wobbly-looking castle with a moat around it that Dean could probably drown in and a tiny stick—supposedly a princess—jammed into the tallest tower of sand. He names the whole thing Hector, even though Dean tries to argue that castles can’t be named Hector, that’s really stupid. Sam just purses his lips and declares that Deans aren’t allowed.

Dean takes that as a challenge, and soon enough the two of them are tussling in the ruins of Hector, knocking into the metal pail. They land with a mighty splash in the moat, scattering the seagulls that had come to watch them fight.

“You ruined my castle,” Sam whines while they wash the sand off them in the surf. “Why do you always have to ruin everything, Dean?”

Dean’s jaw ticks. “Your castle was stupid anyway,” he grumbles, rubbing his knee to get an annoying clump of sand off. “If it didn’t let Deans in, how would all the Sammys stay safe, huh?” Sam doesn’t say anything to that, just puts on his thoughtful face and lets Dean dunk his head under the water happily enough.

After Sam shakes himself off, they head back up to where John’s laying out on the towels. He looks a little like a lobster already, and Dean suddenly remembers they had forgotten the sun lotion.

He tells Sam to wring his hair out over John’s head, and when John pops up, sputtering and confused, Dean holds his hand out and very frankly tells his father he looks like he’d taste good with some lemon-butter sauce. Without a word, John digs into his wallet and gives Dean five dollars to go get some lotion up at the beach-front convenience store.

“You coming, Sam?” Dean asks, offering his brother a hand. Sam hesitates, and then jogs around the towel, nearly tripping four times, and links both of their hands together.

“Can we get a slushie if there’s money left over?” Sam looks up at Dean hopefully. The tip of his nose and the tops of his cheeks are flushed a jolly red color from sun, making his eyes look even bigger and greener.

Dean never can say no to Sammy, and with the extra two dollars left over after they buy the sun tan lotion, they head over to the slush-puppy sign at the local pizza parlor and get a huge blue-raspberry slushie to share. Sam is so ecstatic that he stops them every few feet on the way back to John, opening his mouth as wide as it’ll go and sticking out his tongue so Dean can check to see if it’s blue yet.

By the time they plop back down next to their dad on the sand, Dean is laughing every time Sam opens his mouth, and Sam is trying to see his own tongue by twisting his head this way and that, saying things like, “Can you see it? Why can’t I see it!” and, “My nose is in the way!” Eventually, he gets himself so dizzy that he falls backwards, nearly spilling the slushie all over his chest.

John laughs, reaching over to tickle Sam’s sides, and that’s when all hell breaks loose, because Dean and Sam have a long-standing agreement that tickle-wars are better fought two against one. They ruthlessly exploit John’s weaknesses: Dean sitting on his stomach and getting under his arms, Sam wiggling his fingers behind John’s knees until their dad is just one big laughing, pleading mass of man.

“Say uncle!” Dean crows when John seems like he’s about to stop breathing altogether. “Say uncle!”

John rallies under them, wheezing like an old man, and throws them off. “Never!” he says, and jogs off towards the water, the two of them hot on his heels.

They spend the rest of the day horsing around by the water’s edge, sun screen and blue-raspberry slushie completely forgotten. When the sun starts cooling off and the rest of the beach-goers are packing up their umbrellas, John tells Sam to grab the towels and he and Dean carry the rest of their stuff back up the hill to the car.

Dean hooks an arm over Sammy’s red shoulders while John loads the trunk and feels like nothing can possibly be wrong in the whole entire world.

[identity profile] ericaplease.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:05 am (UTC)(link)
OH. MY. GOD. talk about twisty feelings inside. baby, this was so unbelievably ADORABLE that i think i might have hurt myself WIBBLING ALL OVER IT. *rolls around on the floor*

i love you! forever! ♥

ps, i own winemaking's soul.

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:07 am (UTC)(link)
i love you toooo, plus wee!sam'n'dean think you're da shitz. what more could you ask for in life! *drowns you in kisses*

ps, you should sell it on the black market

[identity profile] ericaplease.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
They ruthlessly exploit John’s weaknesses: Dean sitting on his stomach and getting under his arms, Sam wiggling his fingers behind John’s knees until their dad is just one big laughing, pleading mass of man.

that just.. it makes me ache right in my chest. because they're so happy and i can just imagine the pudgy little Sam!fingers wiggling behind John's knee and making him laugh and *SOBS*

rly? they think i'm da shitz? *blushes*

ps, and people will be like, HO SHIT, I CAN GET WINEMAKING OFF THE BLACK MARKET? and i will be like, bitch, gimme five gazillion dollars for it.

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:16 am (UTC)(link)
is there a term for the whole thing where reading something happy makes you sad 'cause you know what's coming? that doesn't fall under dramatic irony, right? BECAUSE WINCHESTERS. omg. we need a new category of angst that begins with a w.

dean wants to marry you when he's old enough. he says sammy'll be the flower girl. and wear pink.

ps, someone would totally pay you five gazillion dollars for it. you should hike up the price, man.

[identity profile] darksybarite.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:39 am (UTC)(link)
it's like the opposite of schadenfreude, yeah? wacky Germans probably have a word for that too...

plus LOVE *u* Darn you and your confusing backstory, trying to make me think PappyWin was an ok dad!

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Papa was an ok dad! Sure, he wasn't the most responsible at all times, and he could have handled certain things better, but when it comes down to it, he loved his boys more than anything else in the world.

[identity profile] inderpal.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
*wanders in*

wacky Germans probably have a word for that too...
Actually, we don't, but wouldn't that be cool if we had?! I just know that I'll spent the rest of the night making up words to express that.
*facepalm*
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[personal profile] embroiderama 2006-12-17 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, YAY, I love this! I do hope they had days like this sometimes, when everything was good, everything was okay, and all three of them could just live in the moment rather than being so weighed down by the past and their obligations. And the image of little Dean with sunburned cheeks and extra-green eyes? *squee*

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
*wraps them up in LOVE* i hope they had days like this, too. they had to have if they turned out so good, right? aww, boys.

[identity profile] javajunkie13.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love this! Not only are the boys perfectly adorable, but John is a dad (and a good one, zomg ;)). Sunburned and happy is how I love my Winchesters best. Lovely. :D

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes! Just a little crisp around the edges with some sweet and sour dipping sauce.

M'glad you liked it, hon. *smish*

[identity profile] zelost-mind.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, a castle called Hector...

I love how the seagulls had come just to watch them fight, too. Awww little boys...

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course the seagulls came. They had bets placed, don'tcha know. Poor Bill lost four feathers to Jim when Dean came out on top.

[identity profile] mackeygenius.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 05:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, that was so sweet and cute.

IMHO there aren't enough Daddy!John fics, it's nice to see that for once. Your characterisation was perfect. *squeals*

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:06 pm (UTC)(link)
*pinks* THANK YOU.

Re: Papa, I agree. Not many people seem to want to give him any credit for bringing the boys up. Sure, Dean had a lot to do with Sammy turning out as well as he did, but, y'know. Still.

Papa!

[identity profile] dullemarulle.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Mel, I love this. You have an amazing style and all the little details are perfect. You write so freaking much these days, I can hardly keep up with it, but I'll definitely read it over Christmas break.

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
*sheepish* I don't know why all this has been just - boom. Also, I only just now saw your entry about yesterday. Are you ok, honey? Sofie was telling me about the riots.

[identity profile] dullemarulle.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah I'm fine, was just a tad shaken up...

I just took a picture of your card, now all I need to do is find the cable :D

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
well, i'm glad you're ok, then. *hugs*

and stick!porn, wooooot! mwahz, baby.

[identity profile] skyebanshee.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I ♥ this to infinity. Them being just wee boys and laughing and tussling and ganging up on Dad. And Dad being...so incredibly cute with the tickling and the putting Sammy on his shoulders and refusing to say 'uncle'.

Ah! Made my day ^_^.

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad, sweetie! *smish* They're so sweet, aren't they? I want to hug them.

[identity profile] writing-light.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 08:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweetest thing EVER! I'm in love with your boys :D

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 01:59 am (UTC)(link)
*kissy* M'glad you liked it, hon. The boys are just wibble-worthy, hee. :>
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[identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
so, so cute. just a couple of boys and their dad at the beach. (and i love that sam names his sand castle hector, and the image of him trying to see his own tongue is adorable.) i am full of squee. ^_^

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
Sam would by the kid to name his castle Hector. And then try to hug it 'round the middle, ahahaha. Poor geekboy. ♥

[identity profile] ghausia.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
you know, I actually stuck out my tongue to check if I could see it, and then tried to push my nose away when I read the "My nose is in the way" part.

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, it's a valid concern. What if you need to see your tongue in order to live? YOU CAN'T BECAUSE YOUR NOSE IS IN THE WAY. OH NOZ.
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[identity profile] ginnytonnick.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this because it reminds me of my summers at the Metedeconk river. All the parents would lay out close to the picnic tables, and we would run wild with this tribe of kids - horsing around and sometimes crabbing.

This really is adorable.

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, that's sweet. I'm glad it reminded you of that, hon. ♥

[identity profile] inderpal.livejournal.com 2006-12-17 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
EHHHH! So much love! Now I can go to sleep feeling all happy and content and warm inside, because I'll just stick my fingers in my ears and go all lalalala I don't know how the Winchesters story ends and everything is good and happy. *goes into denial*

If it didn’t let Deans in, how would all the Sammys stay safe, huh?”
OMG DEEEEN!!! *squishes him and Sammy and Papa*

I love how they can be just normal little boys here and you write such a loving John and I just want to keep them all, may I??!! *makes puppy dog eyes*

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
YES SURE YOU CAN. If you share, that is. *pointed look*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
Oh woobies!! *smishes you*

This is just tooo adorable.

[identity profile] unamaga.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww, thank you! *smishes back* ♥

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/__3amconfession/ 2006-12-18 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
If John notices, he doesn’t say anything, just sweeps Sam up onto his shoulders, pretending to adjust him around so he can tickle Sam under the arms. Dean squints up at the two of them, grinning, and then they set off. John keeps swerving around making ‘whoa’ noises until Sam shrieks and tugs on his hair.

I love love love love that image. It will make me happy for days to come =D

He names the whole thing Hector, even though Dean tries to argue that castles can’t be named Hector, that’s really stupid. Sam just purses his lips and declares that Deans aren’t allowed.

*pulls wee!Sam close* omg, he's mine. I've taken him and you can't have him. MINE.

Sam is so ecstatic that he stops them every few feet on the way back to John, opening his mouth as wide as it’ll go and sticking out his tongue so Dean can check to see if it’s blue yet.

This is also sitting alongside John carrying Sam on his shoulders in my happy memories.

Okay, so you? You have captured every single bit of innocence that those boys held and wrapped it up into a pretty little present, with a bright shiny bow on top. And how you portrayed John totally stole my heart. *loves on you so much*

[identity profile] green-queen.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
That was adorable and very seasonal if you're a southern hemisphere type like myself. Gorgeous description.

[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com 2006-12-18 03:07 pm (UTC)(link)
What a sweet little slice-of-life story! I love how carefree they all are here. So nice to see them in happier times. You did a great job capturing their younger years.

Favorite lines:

Sam builds a wobbly-looking castle with a moat around it that Dean could probably drown in and a tiny stick—supposedly a princess—jammed into the tallest tower of sand. He names the whole thing Hector

*g* Too, too cute.

Dean’s jaw ticks. “Your castle was stupid anyway,” he grumbles, rubbing his knee to get an annoying clump of sand off. “If it didn’t let Deans in, how would all the Sammys stay safe, huh?”

Aww. Forever the protective big brother.

By the time they plop back down next to their dad on the sand, Dean is laughing every time Sam opens his mouth, and Sam is trying to see his own tongue by twisting his head this way and that, saying things like, “Can you see it? Why can’t I see it!” and, “My nose is in the way!”

LOL! Silly!Sammy is too funny.

John laughs, reaching over to tickle Sam’s sides, and that’s when all hell breaks loose, because Dean and Sam have a long-standing agreement that tickle-wars are better fought two against one. They ruthlessly exploit John’s weaknesses: Dean sitting on his stomach and getting under his arms, Sam wiggling his fingers behind John’s knees until their dad is just one big laughing, pleading mass of man.

I love this image. Go, boys, go! *g*

[identity profile] ghausia.livejournal.com 2006-12-20 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey! I just saw the tip of it!!! Does this mean I won't die now?
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[personal profile] innie_darling 2006-12-31 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
What a lovely little snapshot!