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Ahahah. I'd almost forgotten about this thing.
Jules: TELL ME MEL
Jules: DO YOU WRITE POEMS?
Mel: ....i used to
I feel this is sufficiently apt considering I got two and a half hours of sleep last night. SO TELL ME, who else here secretly used to write poems? Don't be shy, we're all friends.
Jules: DO YOU WRITE POEMS?
Mel: ....i used to
An Ode to Beds in Three Movements
-July 6, 2006Movement IO, best beloved!You shine in my mindLike the brightest of stars—Perhaps a red giant!O, best beloved bed!You are so squishyLike the softest of roasted marshmallows—Gooey on the inside and crunchy on the outside!O, my bed, O, my bed!How I wish to be with youAnd feel your loving embrace!Movement IISheets—Four-hundred count Egyptian—How I long.Pillows—Feather down and well used—How I wish.Mattress—Firm yet with good yield—How I pine.Bed—Horizontal and comfortable—How I yearn.Movement IIIEven a lover’s embraceCannot compare to yours.Even a cup of hot cocoaCannot replicate your warmth.Oh my bed, you are my love.In my absence, dearest,Do not rid yourself of myBody-shaped indent,For soon I will be with you again.
I feel this is sufficiently apt considering I got two and a half hours of sleep last night. SO TELL ME, who else here secretly used to write poems? Don't be shy, we're all friends.
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They will also never see the light of day AGAIN. lol
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The best part about your poem, however, is the combination it makes with your icon. Because Rodney McKay, were he the secret poem-writing type (and I'm absolutely sure he is) could very easily have written this poem.
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HAHAH!!! Especially the first movement. Comparing a bed to a gooey marshmallow is definitely Rodney's style.
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And of course can you imagine how jealous John would be if he found out Rodney had a bed worth writing poems about?
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God yes! "You never write me poetry, McKay. Where's the romance?"
EDIT: AHAH. i just got what you actually meant now, with john being jealous OF the bed and wanting it for himself and. uh. woops.
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I remember this poem. <33333333
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ps, norway is displeased :O
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I really like yours. The first movement is very funny, the second original, and the third is so true! Awesome!
I still write poetry, but not very often anymore. I find it so much more difficult than fiction, and a whole mess more frustrating. But I did just post some of my favorite ones that I'd written during college here (http://saekokato.livejournal.com/142263.html)! Heh.
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Old HS Poems (http://www.fictionpress.com/~CrazyAce)
A Few Poem/Songs (http://community.livejournal.com/tumble_down/770.html#cutid1)
Oh, Dear, I Even Attempted A Rap (http://crazyace86.deviantart.com/art/Take-A-Stand-37093046)
Come. Revel in my outrageous silliness. =D